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"Next Time on Mystic Ponies"

"生活 在 該 奇蹟螺栓" (Life in the Wonderbolts)


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As the Wonderbolts arrive to Ponyville, Spitfire flies down to meet Rainbow Dash. 

"Rainbow Dash! Glad we found you. We need you in the show when we get to Ponyville. Flying." Spitfire offers Rainbow a spot to perform in the upcoming show as well as full membership in the Wonderbolts, much to Rainbow and Scootaloo's delight.

"You mean..." Scootaloo, Aquastroke and Blazefist are now celebrating with Rainbow Dash in delight as Rainbow is actually gonna become a Wonderbolt, her dream is gonna come true!

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Rainbow Dash was packing some stuffs up into her bag. Rainbow Blaze opened the door as he entered the scene and started to talk to her...

"Dashie, is there something you want to talk with me?"

"It's nothing, dad. Really! I'm fine."

"Kiddo, I'm your father. And I want to help you."

"I said I'm fine!"

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Blazefist and Aquastroke are talking about Rainbow's Behavior.

"Rainbow Dash seems distracted. Think she got rough day on her first day?"

"I hope she's not doing something stupid again."

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Spitfire is gonna introduce someone to Rainbow...

Spitfire: Rainbow Dash, I would like you to meet your Wondercolt Reserve - Indigo Zap! She got your spirit and spit, I'd tell ya! And best of all, she's Blazefist's kid.

Rainbow's shocked to hear that!

"Wait, seriously?!"

Indigo Zap saluted to Spitfire ...

"Indigo Zap reporting for duty, ma'am! I'm ready for the action."

Rainbow Dash groaned as she facepalmed her forehead...

"This is gonna be a long day..."

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The worst is about to come...

Rainbow Dash screamed as she is flying around and is about to fly straight at the audience.

Her dad cried out to his daughter!!

"Dashie!"

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Author's Notes:
I changed Newbie Dash to Life in the Wonderbolts instead because even though I didn't watch the episode (I switched from Charter to Roku; Last Season 6 Episode was "The Gift of the Maud Pie"), this episode should've done better with rainbow telling spitfire about her mortifying nickname from her past, The Wonderbolts should've been sensitive with rainbow or Rainbow could have been/done better!

Plus, the title is in chinese!

So anyway, be sure to :+fav: and watch!
Author's Note: In honor of JusSonic's upcoming 9,000 Deviation... 

Here's a deleted scene for his first mlp story; "Curse of the Demon Pony", in the scene, we see boris and his two knuckleheads push Ben inside the cage, trapping him with the mini-were inside turning him into a demon pony... but we never saw his transformation!! So for this special deleted scene, we're about to see Ben's transformation to a Demon Pony.

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"A certain spell that is said for Earth ponies to learn magic. It should be here somewhere..." Boris said thoughtfully then glances at a cage nearby that appears to be covered. "Maybe it's in there. Ben, check it out."

Ben hesitates but the thought of him being with Twilight soon clouds his judgments. The colt heads over to the cage and opens it, looking inside.

"I don't see any..." Suddenly, without warning, Boxco and Dum-Dum quickly push Ben inside the cage, "AAAH!" The two quickly close the cage, locking the colt inside. Ben got up from inside the prison and looks out the window of the door. "Guys, let me out! I have been locked in!"

Boris and his goons laugh cruelly with the boss asking slyly, "What? Don't feel so confident now? That shows what happened if you try to be with my filly!"

Ben groans in disbelief as the bullies laugh cruelly. He should've known! Boris never wanted to help the colt be with Twilight at the school...he just lured Ben here to get locked up in this cage, pulling a prank to scare him; Or worst, get into trouble once Nexus comes back by morning.

Ben hears a growl and turns to see a darkness creature coming to him. The colt screams as he pounds on the door while screaming, "Guys, get me out! There's something in here! Guys, GUYS!"

Ben mare begins running away from the mini-were as it begins to chase him... meanwhile, the bullies were laughing a bit, ignoring Ben's cries of fear as the cage shakes around. This is so much fun. Boris knew of the Mini-Were in here. Maybe this would scare the foolish colt into staying away from Twilight...or get him into trouble if he was found the next morning.

The mini-were then begins to pounce on ben mare.  But as he was trying to defend himself, the mini-were begins to bite ben on his right hoof as he screams in pain! He proceeds to kick it out of the way and knocked it unconscious, suddenly...

He stands in agony, as he begins sweating profusely, clinging to the sides of his head.  He trembles violently.

New bolts of agonizing pain wrack through Ben's body, as if they are burning him. He rips at his shirt, tearing it off, his body is dripping wet. Standing naked in the center of the room, Ben gasps for air.

He falls to his knees and then forward on his hoofs. He remains on his hoofs, trying to master his torment; but it's no use.  On all fours he gives himself over to the excruciating hurt and slowly begins to change.

The metamorphosis from pony into beast is not an easy one.  As bone and muscle bend and reform themselves, the body suffers lacerating pain. Ben's flesh began to move the rearranging tissue.  His mouth bleeds as fangs emerge.  His whole face distorts as his jaw extends, his skull literally changing shape.  His hoofs gnarl and curl back as claws burst forward.

It shows the full moon outside through the pet cages.  Ben Mare's moans change slowly into
low guttural growls.  We hear the four footfalls as the creature begins to smash on the door.

The door suddenly begins to get pounded. Dum-Dum stops laughing as he notices the door itself is close to breaking off. The white Pegasi pony asks his boss, "Errr, Boris? Was this supposed to happen?"

The two unicorns stop laughing as they saw what's happening. The trio of bullies yelps and move out of the way as the cage door is broken down. They gape and saw Ben coming out...except the colt is now a furry black huge pony with red eyes, wolf like teeth, a black mane and, a black tail.

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Author's notes: Well, I hoped you liked the scary but cool deleted scene!! Anyway, be sure to :+fav: and watch.

References:
Ben Mare's Demon Pony Transformation is a reference to John Landis 1981's Feature Film: "An American Werewolf in London"
COTDP Deleted Scene: Ben Mare's Transformation
Here's the deleted scene for :iconjussonic:'s COTDP, which is abbreviated for "Curse of the Demon Pony", for his upcoming 9,000 deviation.

you can read the full story here: www.fimfiction.net/story/13830…
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I'm Tad Fox, and I Have Been Diagnosed With Type-1 Diabetes and Autism, I'm a HUGE Fan of Video Games and Cartoons, I'm Gonna Be Good to the People I Love and Not Treating People Like Crap All The Time.

Current Residence: Bluford,IL
Favourite genre of music: Rock, and Hip-Hop.
Favourite style of art: Painting
MP3 player of choice: GoGear Vibe
Shell of choice: Fish Hooks
Wallpaper of choice: Ed, Edd, Eddy
Skin of choice: Micheal Jackson
Favourite cartoon character: Phineas and Ferb, Ed,Edd, n Eddy, Spongebob, Woody and Buzz, Timmy Turner, Danny Phantom, and Looney Tunes
Personal Quote: What's Up Doc? - Bugs Bunny

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WOO! You have boundless energy and will take every single possible moment to exert it! Not only that, but you looooove to party, so wherever you can be that you can party and get down at, you will want to be! Your love of parties and laughter makes you a very fun pony to be around, because all of your friends generally have a good time when they're with you — as long as your overabundance of energy doesn't irritate them. You don't just go against the grain, but you pretend the grain isn't even there, saying neigh to the norm and doing whatever it is you want to do, regardless of how silly it may be. Your carefree attitude is admirable in that sense, but you can easily get discouraged when people don't quite 'get' your sense of randomness and laughter. If you can't put a smile on a friend's face or if you disappoint them, you'll feel bad about it. Despite your rather quirky nature, you often times do know exactly what you're doing, even if it may seem you're going about it in an odd way. You have a certain sense of things and it would be wise for your friends to believe you. You may be naive and carefree, but you're willing to try almost anything out, even if you're completely clueless on it. You're also a very creative pony, dabbling in songs, performances, and other creative ventures, while also coming up with creative solutions to whatever problems may be out there.
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I just heard from my mom that in the upcoming "Frozen 2", Elsa is going to get a girlfriend, Why?

Children are innocent and it is very important not to refocus the film with political messages, but rather keep to its original theme by helping children dream of eternal values, such as: love, friendship, faithfulness, loyalty, generosity, etc.

We ask that Disney find a nice and loving Prince for Queen Elsa to fall in love with. 

Here's the link to the petition: www.citizengo.org/en/fm/34400-…
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nigel5469 Featured By Owner 23 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cartoonfan22! The story is up! And I already send the notes about Episode 7: Newbie Dash sneak peak. And use Transformers Prime Beast Hunters Theme Song - my favorite and best.

Thank you from your buddy, P.M.
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( ・w・)<AllArtEarthPeople Welcome to, friend.

Greeting late I'm sorry.

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This Group is a Group that I built for my friends.
That is, fun friends. All is OK.

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Sincerely, RorimitanHG (☆ろりみたん☆).

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Not sure you noticed but I posted a picture pf Shadow Dragon. Check it out.
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Hiya!
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Hello.
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It's been awhile huh?
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